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Re: GDI Watchtower [message #269895 is a reply to message #269772]

Sat, 30 June 2007 18:40

nopol10
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The Merovingian wrote on Sat, 30 June 2007 21:18

Very short, and stubby. The boxy supports are too boxy, add detail or polygons to make them less boxy. I like the base, don't know what that box at the front of it is. The platform is too boxy aswell. From memory i think the actual guard towers platform isn't a box. Cannon looks too low down aswell. It looks like if it tries to attack people within 5 meters from the base it'll destroy the rail.

There's something wrong with the rail too. Can't quite put my finger on it.

(If you found any of this offensive to your work i apologize, but that is criticism.)

Yeah, I just noticed that if the turret swings, the rail will crack.

Thanks for the comments.

Oh, this was my reference picture and so was the one that sadukar put. Except that I have no idea why the box in front of the tower is different:
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		GDI Watchtower By: nopol10 on Sat, 30 June 2007 02:23
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: Veyrdite on Sat, 30 June 2007 04:10
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: Jerad2142 on Sat, 30 June 2007 06:39
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: Sn1per74* on Sat, 30 June 2007 06:45
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: Sn1per74* on Sat, 30 June 2007 20:53
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: Zion on Sat, 30 June 2007 06:18
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: nopol10 on Sat, 30 June 2007 18:40
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: sadukar09 on Sat, 30 June 2007 08:13
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: BeiRneY on Sat, 30 June 2007 09:15
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: Veyrdite on Sat, 30 June 2007 19:28
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: nopol10 on Sat, 30 June 2007 20:38
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: sadukar09 on Sun, 01 July 2007 06:15
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: Zion on Sun, 01 July 2007 14:13
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: jnz on Sun, 01 July 2007 15:30
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: R315r4z0r on Sun, 01 July 2007 18:16
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: nopol10 on Sun, 01 July 2007 18:39
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: Brandon on Sun, 01 July 2007 19:43
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: HORQWER on Mon, 02 July 2007 13:11
		Re: GDI Watchtower By: danpaul88 on Mon, 02 July 2007 13:14

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