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Re: GDI Watchtower [message #269772 is a reply to message #269749] Sat, 30 June 2007 06:18 Go to previous messageGo to previous message
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Very short, and stubby. The boxy supports are too boxy, add detail or polygons to make them less boxy. I like the base, don't know what that box at the front of it is. The platform is too boxy aswell. From memory i think the actual guard towers platform isn't a box. Cannon looks too low down aswell. It looks like if it tries to attack people within 5 meters from the base it'll destroy the rail.

There's something wrong with the rail too. Can't quite put my finger on it.

(If you found any of this offensive to your work i apologize, but that is criticism.)
 
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