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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87166] Thu, 13 May 2004 11:06 Go to next message
Walrus is currently offline  Walrus
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Something to be finished, or just a one off?

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"England expects that every man will do his duty"

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87167] Thu, 13 May 2004 11:09 Go to previous messageGo to next message
KIRBY098 is currently offline  KIRBY098
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Each day, something new. I have been wanting to contribute something back to dedicated fans for awhile now. I have a talent for writing, so here it is.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87173] Thu, 13 May 2004 11:28 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Good... Its going fine so far. it seems to be a situational at the moment, they always start fine, but have a habit of running out of steam after the first few paragraphs. Good luck, I want to know what happens in that barn... I just wish I had the balls to post up some of my own work. Now that would be funny..

One Last Time

"England expects that every man will do his duty"
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87179] Thu, 13 May 2004 11:59 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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What happend to the m00trix? Confused

w00t?
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87181] Thu, 13 May 2004 12:00 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I have always wanted to go a little deeper into the Nod world.

What would posses someone to be a Nod trooper?
How did they come to rise to power?
Where did the Hierarchy develop, and what would someone of that time period have seen?

I have been here just about every day since the game came out. I have staying power, and 45 minute lunch breaks in an office. Don't worry about that.


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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87183] Thu, 13 May 2004 12:03 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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What happend to the m00trix? Confused



M00trix was silly. This will be a rather serious novella, based on the cutscenes from Tiberian Sun, Firestorm, and the original C&C.


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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87206] Thu, 13 May 2004 12:55 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Nice way to start the story there Kirb. Loof foward to reading more.

R.I.P. TreyD. You will be missed, but not forgotten.
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87227] Thu, 13 May 2004 14:10 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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/me points to the Den's War Story section.

You can post there to gain more fans. Smile


We are what we repeatedly do. Excellence then, is not an act but a habit. - Aristotle

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87229] Thu, 13 May 2004 14:14 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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KIRBY098

I have a talent for writing, so here it is.


hehe.


DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87251] Thu, 13 May 2004 14:53 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Then when its done someone can make it into a screen play useing scripts and animations in renegade ^_^

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87288] Thu, 13 May 2004 17:00 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Oh no...actual quality writing in a chat forum?!?!?

Anyway, good luck, or whatever you say to someone who's writing something.


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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87461] Fri, 14 May 2004 09:32 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Verry nice.

Maybe you should add on to the "FUD Report" on n00stories in Prevails absence.


R.I.P. TreyD. You will be missed, but not forgotten.
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87462] Fri, 14 May 2004 09:34 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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It has been tempting, but it is not my work.

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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87467] Fri, 14 May 2004 10:09 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Good Work!
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87486] Fri, 14 May 2004 11:45 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Kirby, wow. That's all I can say. I am literally watching your story. I don't see the words. I, of course, read them, but it's as if I'm staring through the words and watching the story. It's kind of scary to think that words could paint such a picture.

I am not one to want to read, at all. There are few things that I actually like to read and your story has gotten me sucked into it.


whoa.
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87489] Fri, 14 May 2004 11:48 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I am happy you enjoy it. Lots more to come in this soldier's story.

Stay tuned.


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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87500] Fri, 14 May 2004 12:09 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Ditto. Excellent story-telling. I can't wait to read more. Smile

I'm the bawss.
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87526] Fri, 14 May 2004 13:42 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Its going well, not like the stuff I write - that’s a good thing - I hope that this get an ending. I’m fed up if reading web stories that run out of steam less then a third in.
...keep up the good work!...


One Last Time

"England expects that every man will do his duty"
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #87601] Fri, 14 May 2004 18:31 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Nice job Kirby. This has to be the best story I have ever read. I could literally visuallise what was happening in the story as I read it. Keep up the good work, I am really looking forward to reading the rest of this. Kirby, have you ever thought of writing books for a carrer or in spare time for some extra money? If you haven't you should. This story is great! Very Happy

DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #88332] Tue, 18 May 2004 07:23 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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:thumbsup: :thumbsup: Cool

R.I.P. TreyD. You will be missed, but not forgotten.
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #88380] Tue, 18 May 2004 12:00 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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We need a video to go along with the story. Razz

w00t?
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #88382] Tue, 18 May 2004 12:12 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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For a second there I thought this was going to be cut short... We need more!

One Last Time

"England expects that every man will do his duty"
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #88383] Tue, 18 May 2004 12:16 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Someone give this thing a "Sticky" please Very Happy

R.I.P. TreyD. You will be missed, but not forgotten.
DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #88400] Tue, 18 May 2004 12:34 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Sorry folks. I took a family day on Monday. Smile

More to come.


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DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #88478] Tue, 18 May 2004 18:35 Go to previous messageGo to previous message
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Great story Kirby! Not bad for a squid, not bad at all. Wink

Semper Fi
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