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Mon, 05 April 2004 19:41 |
L6P
Messages: 18 Registered: March 2004
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The text is very hard to read...I love the style of it, but I had to take a few minutes to decifer that the text was Unforgiven. It was mainly how the "n"s were made. I'd say make those "n"s a bit more natural, but still keep the style.
Also, depending on the text you put into your left nav, it might be too small. Try it with the text to make sure everything fits.
The border is very clean and defined. However, the text and the doll are not. IMHO, the layout lacks unity. Try the border in the same kind of style as the text and doll. It might look better. If that doesn't work, try to find some other way to unify the layout. As of not, either the clean border is out of place, or the gungy, inky look of the text and doll are out of place.
Keep improving it; it will pay off with the final project
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By: z310 on Mon, 05 April 2004 19:07
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By: L6P on Mon, 05 April 2004 19:41
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By: England on Tue, 06 April 2004 01:25
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By: z310 on Tue, 06 April 2004 12:10
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By: SS217 on Tue, 06 April 2004 15:54
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By: z310 on Tue, 06 April 2004 17:03
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By: z310 on Wed, 07 April 2004 12:32
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By: z310 on Wed, 07 April 2004 17:14
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By: z310 on Thu, 08 April 2004 19:01
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By: z310 on Thu, 08 April 2004 21:46
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