| Re: Black metal Artillery [message #458563 is a reply to message #458401] |
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GEORGE ZIMMER
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"BAW YOU GUYS ARE MEAN RENSKINS IS NICER"
But anyway, despite it looking like AIDS, I'll be nice and offer constructive criticism (laced with comments about how it looks like AIDS).
1: The coloring is off. I don't mean the color choices (black/red can be a good combo... then again black/anything can look good), I mean the placement of the colors and what they form. It's like random pieces of red slapped onto a black shape that happens to be shaped like an artillery. This is why graphic design needs to be separated from technical graphics when it comes to critiquing graphics in games- they're two very separate things, but due to the absence of pointing out graphic design, no one seems to realize its existence (and that it actually matters).
TL;DR: DESIGN IS AIDS, LEARN GRAPHIC DESIGN
2: The idea is bad. I've never really associated artillery with black metal (maybe dubstep, though). Black metal has about as much to do with artillery as weed does (there's a reason any skin that involves weed will inevitably be shit).
Furthermore, what MAKES it black metal? At least with weed skins, there's "420 MARY JANE" and the weed logo plastered all over the damn thing along with the entire thing being green. But aside from a typical goth color (and goth =/= black metal) and some plastered on tattoo that only vaguely resembles black metal imagery, it really doesn't even feel "black metal" to me. My first impression was "goth", actually  .
As an aside, black metal is generally more towards nihilism than it is gothic/death/whatever. Given that, there could be potentially cool (probably not) themes you could go with. A sort of "executor" style, or a look that says "I'm an artillerist. I'm going to kill you, and I won't give the least bit of a damn about it. It's my job". Not a SKULL AND DEATH AND RRRRRRUUUGH look, either (that's death metal), but something that could at least exemplify black metal.
TL;DR: ARTILLERY AINT BLACK METAL, AND YOU FAILED AS AN ARTIST TO BREAK THAT BOUNDARY AND ENDED UP WITH SOMETHING THAT LOOKS LIKE AIDS
3: You didn't even bother to change up the actual texture, but rather, recolored it and slapped on a few things. That is the epitome of terrible skinning work (any decent modding community views "recolor" to be synonymous with "large, gaping, uncreative vagina"). It's also why people tend to hate skins- a lot of them end up being uncreative recolors. There's very little creativity done (exceptions exist, but exceptions do not define what they're being excepted from), regardless of whatever textures are slapped on.
I mean, shit, you didn't even bother to change up or remove the Nod symbols! Come on!
TL;DR: RECOLORS LOOK LIKE AIDS, REGARDLESS OF ANYTHING SLAPPED ONTO THEM AFTERWARDS
4: Why the fuck did you color the tires and gave them huge rims?
TL;DR: WHY THE FUCK DID YOU COLOR THE TIRES AND GIVE THEM HUGE RIMS?
Toggle Spoiler| Scrin wrote on Sat, 24 January 2009 13:22 |
| cAmpa wrote on Sat, 24 January 2009 12:45 |
Scrin, stop pming people to get the building bars.
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FUCK YOU AND THIS SHIT GAME WITH YOUR SCRIPTS!!! I HAVE ASKING YOU AND ANOTHER NOOBS HERE ABOUT HELP WITH THAT BUILDING ICONS FEATURES FOR YEARS, BUT YOU KEEP IGNORING ME AND KEEP WRITE SHIT, SO BURN YOU AND YOUR ASSLICKERS FRIENDS, THIS TIME I'M NOT COME BACK!!!!!!!!!   
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| Re: Black metal Artillery [message #458589 is a reply to message #458495] |
Thu, 27 October 2011 15:40 |
C C_guy
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| shaitan wrote on Wed, 26 October 2011 04:21 |
| Aircraftkiller wrote on Tue, 25 October 2011 22:11 |
If I don't like it, I'll comment on it. Simple.
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You comment on everything, don't you? Here's a tip: shut the fuck up for a change.
The guy wants to make skins, it's none of your goddamned business.
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Agreed, just ignore the kid hes a goof and gives new meaning to the term to, he's full of himself and "thinks" hes somebody, yet hes a nobody to anybody that matters, if anything, the kid should just stfu and they really should kick him outta here.
A true goof by every means of the word, keep modeling man your doing fine keep up the work, as for the goof we dont need you or care about what map and crap you make, do us all a favor and get the fuck out and stay out WE DONT care what you made/make or do.
i have seen you in game stating shit like : "do you know who i am? , and or : I made this map and shit like that, so now if you say your educated? (makes me laugh and laugh) then your very poorly educated cuz you sure dont talk or act like it , so grow the fuck up aircraft goof!
WE DONT CARE !! YOU GET IT YET KID!? damn retard!
I guess it would take a retard like trooprm02 to think that he'd accomplished something by pointing out what everyone already knows about.
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| Re: Black metal Artillery [message #458591 is a reply to message #458590] |
Thu, 27 October 2011 15:59 |
C C_guy
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| Aircraftkiller wrote on Thu, 27 October 2011 15:45 |
I should post another haha guy for this clown. Something along the lines of "HA! HA! You say you don't care BUT YOU KEEP TALKING ABOUT IT LIKE YOU DO!!1!"
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Go do another bowl of crack and keep dreaming kid, such a retard, go get a clue.(i am still laughing i guess cuz i care lol.)
I guess it would take a retard like trooprm02 to think that he'd accomplished something by pointing out what everyone already knows about.
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| Re: Black metal Artillery [message #458595 is a reply to message #458592] |
Thu, 27 October 2011 16:11 |
C C_guy
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| Aircraftkiller wrote on Thu, 27 October 2011 16:00 |
You sound mad, bro.
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mad? bro? um i dont think so, i am alot more educated then you son? just sit down think about how you act and talk , then take your head out of your ass and grow up? mad ...haha only kids think like that, and rightly so coming from you, thats the least i expected from your mentality heh.
mad haha if i were mad believe you me son you would know it.
anyway enough said , like i said before your a nobody to anybody that matters. think for a change about it son!
What a goof you are keep it up and keep showing everyone your inteligence lol.
after all wannabe's always do stand out in crowds.lol
Keep up the good work. lol
I guess it would take a retard like trooprm02 to think that he'd accomplished something by pointing out what everyone already knows about.
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| Re: Black metal Artillery [message #458615 is a reply to message #458595] |
Fri, 28 October 2011 01:20 |
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Spyder
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| C C_guy wrote on Fri, 28 October 2011 01:11 |
i am alot more educated then you son
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Sure, that's why you have such outstanding writing skill...
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| Re: Black metal Artillery [message #458639 is a reply to message #458401] |
Fri, 28 October 2011 07:54 |
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Altzan
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Hehe, I love this thread.
As for the skin, I agree with the opinion that there's definitely work put into this, but it's not a style I can enjoy looking at.
I cannot imagine how the clockwork of the universe can exist without a clockmaker. ~Voltaire
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