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Ok more effort [message #435109]

Fri, 20 August 2010 06:39

renalpha
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Please tell me if this is good.

I think i did quite good on this one.

http://sound-officials.nl/play-populair.php?play=16

Aircraftkiller wrote on Fri, 18 February 2011 23:50

I figured some people will still go LOLOLOL STARVING CATS LOOOOLZ UR A FAG or some dumb shit like that. Thanks for not disappointing! Smile

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Re: Ok more effort [message #435117 is a reply to message #435109]

Fri, 20 August 2010 07:07

reborn
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Location: uk - london

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It's quite difficult to get into the rythem of it, as it's counter intuative at several spots. If you listen to it at around the 42 second mark, then that's the sort of thing I'm talking about. Kinda like rubbing your tummy and patting your head at the same time.
It's off putting rather than something I could sit and bob my head to.

This is my honest opinion, I am not saying this to be a jack-ass. Sorry Sad

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Re: Ok more effort [message #435121 is a reply to message #435109]

Fri, 20 August 2010 07:54

SSADMVR
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Registered: June 2006

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Recruit

Words can not explain how bad this is.

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Re: Ok more effort [message #435123 is a reply to message #435109]

Fri, 20 August 2010 08:43

Dover
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I think I'd appriciate this music more if I had orange skin and wore pink shirts.

DarkDemin wrote on Thu, 03 August 2006 19:19

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Re: Ok more effort [message #435137 is a reply to message #435109]

Fri, 20 August 2010 11:25

Ryu
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Registered: September 2006
Location: Liverpool, England.

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The sounds and shit you use are alright.

Your knowledge on rhythm and timing is awful.

You need to learn these two concepts before releasing anything else. Plus the fact you seem to be lacking a bass riff, or any bass at all. remember, everyone grooves to the beat of the bass.

Listen to these House tracks, and compare them to yours
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iG31qwDueW4
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pa7xEsFWpE8

Notice the tempo and how everything gradually comes together. I'm not saying you need a vocalist or anything but musically wise your all over the place.

Presence is a curious thing, if you think you need to prove it... you probably never had it in the first place.

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