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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101843] Thu, 15 July 2004 22:11 Go to previous messageGo to next message
flyingfox is currently offline  flyingfox
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Ohhhh man, I thought he was gonna win this one. Ohh well, nice job. Smile Keep up the marvelous work Kirby.


huh? Confused He did win, his object was to get to the bunker. He just chose to fight cuz that iz bad ass y0!1!11!!11 -- more of a "half win" if you will.

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101844] Thu, 15 July 2004 22:13 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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spreegem

Ohhhh man, I thought he was gonna win this one. Ohh well, nice job. Smile Keep up the marvelous work Kirby.


huh? Confused He did win, his object was to get to the bunker. He just chose to fight cuz that iz bad ass y0!1!11!!11 -- more of a "half win" if you will.


God, it's spread.

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101850] Thu, 15 July 2004 23:09 Go to previous messageGo to next message
spreegem is currently offline  spreegem
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KIRBY098

his punished body collapsing in defeat.


That mean he lost, does it not?

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101851] Thu, 15 July 2004 23:11 Go to previous messageGo to next message
flyingfox is currently offline  flyingfox
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That means his body is in defeat because he's collapsed. It's just a way of adding more vibe to the action.

Quote:

It was the voice of training officer Valdez.

"Ok hotshot, let's see how you do against some real soldiers. All you have to do is get to the command bunker."


Quote:

God, it's spread.


Yep

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #101915] Fri, 16 July 2004 07:08 Go to previous messageGo to next message
K9Trooper is currently offline  K9Trooper
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He did not lose to the BH he was physically and emotionally defeated by fatigue.

Story is going great Kirb. :thumbsup:

R.I.P. TreyD. You will be missed, but not forgotten.

[Updated on: Tue, 20 July 2004 07:53]

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102100] Fri, 16 July 2004 21:00 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Its badass, I wish I had some C&C storys Id post them here, Im pretty damn good.

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102141] Fri, 16 July 2004 22:34 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Nice!

And more!!!!

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102586] Mon, 19 July 2004 07:55 Go to previous messageGo to next message
KIRBY098 is currently offline  KIRBY098
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majikent, I changed a bit of the text. The uniform insignia was confusing, and not what I intended. Could you please revise the site?

Thanks

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102592] Mon, 19 July 2004 08:35 Go to previous messageGo to next message
exnyte is currently offline  exnyte
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done!

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102595] Mon, 19 July 2004 08:56 Go to previous messageGo to next message
exnyte is currently offline  exnyte
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Sorry for the double post.

For those who may have any bookmarks or what not. The Scorpion's Tale is now available to access by going to http://tale.exnyte.com. This will take you straight to the story! Enjoy.

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102608] Mon, 19 July 2004 09:24 Go to previous messageGo to next message
KIRBY098 is currently offline  KIRBY098
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Muchos Gracias!
Merci!
Thanks.

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102721] Mon, 19 July 2004 16:39 Go to previous messageGo to next message
exnyte is currently offline  exnyte
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I gave Kirby a section on my website entirely for reasons like this.

**** We interrupt your post viewing for a special announcement! ****

You can enjoy an uninterrupted, uncut, and commercial free version of The Scorpion's Tale on exnyte.com! Just hit http://tale.exnyte.com now!

And as an added bonus, if you click now, the shipping is free!

**** We now bring you back to your previous post, already in progress. ****

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102789] Mon, 19 July 2004 21:06 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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I made a pdf for this but I don't know what to do with it since i cannot upload it.

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102804] Mon, 19 July 2004 22:47 Go to previous messageGo to next message
exnyte is currently offline  exnyte
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Actually, a pdf format of the story wouldn't be prudent until it is finished... I will also be happy to provide this when it is completed.

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102866] Tue, 20 July 2004 05:30 Go to previous messageGo to next message
KIRBY098 is currently offline  KIRBY098
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And spreegem, the mind behind Centurion is a part of the story line, so I won't be revealing that until the appropriate time.

I do appreciate everyone who reads, and thier feedback.

majikent has asked for, and received permission to use the work on his site, and it really is a better layout than these forums are. This story is intended to be a gift back to this community and fans of C&C, so I continue to post it here despite my feelings of late in regards to rampant mindless flaming of community mods.

I encourage exnyte.com's use, and the forums are brand new, and clean. No flames. (Yet) He even has a place where you can vote on the story.

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102884] Tue, 20 July 2004 07:37 Go to previous messageGo to next message
warranto is currently offline  warranto
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Just cleaned up some of the irrelivant posts, I think I got them all. And Kirby I did edit your last post as part of the clean up done was to get rid of the post you quoted. No use getting people confused by looking for something thats not there.

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102886] Tue, 20 July 2004 07:43 Go to previous messageGo to next message
KIRBY098 is currently offline  KIRBY098
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Understood. Thanks.

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102889] Tue, 20 July 2004 07:57 Go to previous messageGo to next message
K9Trooper is currently offline  K9Trooper
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Verry good story. I see a hint of Navy in some of the words you use i.e. "Deck". Army uses the term "Field" for the place of "Formation"

Again great story.

R.I.P. TreyD. You will be missed, but not forgotten.

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102900] Tue, 20 July 2004 08:57 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Nightma12 is currently offline  Nightma12
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V nice kirby! Very Happy

i just read though the entire story Very Happy

WE WANT MORE! Razz Very Happy

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102904] Tue, 20 July 2004 09:08 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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Can't wait till what happens next. Very Happy

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #102948] Tue, 20 July 2004 11:52 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Nightma12 is currently offline  Nightma12
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V nice! Very Happy

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Keep em coming!

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #103103] Wed, 21 July 2004 12:43 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Anonymous
Thats a very catchy jingle !!! Laughing Laughing













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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #103104] Wed, 21 July 2004 12:53 Go to previous messageGo to next message
Weirdo is currently offline  Weirdo
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I like the story, but one thing I find strange.
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Take the red pill, then we'll honor you.

Since when did the Matrix get involved, I know Cabal is a pretty good AI, but I don't want to compare him to the matrix.

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #103111] Wed, 21 July 2004 13:13 Go to previous messageGo to next message
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there is another "red pill" Wink

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- DISCUSS: The Scorpion's Tale [message #103114] Wed, 21 July 2004 13:22 Go to previous messageGo to previous message
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Where the matrix made you wake up, this one makes you fall asleep.

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